Monday, November 24, 2014

The Hike Part 2 - A Photostory

Hello,
Check out Part 1 of The Hike HERE

Where we last left off . . .


"Come on Lilly help me up!" called Rachel,
"Hello, Lilly!" 

"Fine, I'll do it myself" said Rachel.

"Um, . . . Lilly" questioned Rachel.

*gasp*


"Lilly, Lilly, I'm coming Lilly!" cried Rachel.

"Humph" moaned Rachel.

"Are you okay" questioned Rachel.

"Answer me Lilly, answer me!" pleaded Rachel.

"I have to get down to her" Rachel thought as she sat up, "but how?"

"There has to be some way down" reasoned Rachel.

Rachel walked over to the edge of the rock.

"Look, there's another rock!" said Rachel.

"Now if I can just get down to it" thought Rachel.

"Almost there, keep going" Rachel encouraged herself.

"Don't stop now" said Rachel.

"There!" cried Rachel.

"Now to get to Lilly!" said Rachel.

"I'll just slide down this rock" thought Rachel.

"I made it!" said Rachel.

Rachel turned the corner.

She slid down to Lilly's side.

"It's okay Lilly, I'm here . . .

 . . . you are going to be okay" said Rachel.

"I need to get you out of here, but I cannot move you on my own" said Rachel

"Oh, God, please, I need your help!" Rachel cried


"Hey, are you okay?!?" someone yelled as they started to run.

"Thank you, God" Rachel whispered


I hope you enjoyed it!
A little background information: So, I wasn't planning on Lilly falling and everything but while I was taking the first picture of this post she actually did fall. (So that first picture is an action shot, haha.) Anyways, after Lilly fell, I left her where she fell and built my story around the incident; after I made sure she wan't missing any limbs or anything :)
 - Jessica

11 comments:

  1. Oh, I hope Lilly will be okay! This part was sooo cute and I loved it! The pictures are so pretty! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
    ~Kaitlyn

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    1. I am so happy you enjoyed it. I wasn't planning on having a part 3 but this kind of ends on a cliff hanger. Should I do a part 3?

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  2. Awww... I hope Lilys alright!
    This story was really fun to read :0) It was also sweet how Rachael went to rescue her.
    Beautiful pics!
    - Zoë

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    1. I'm so happy you thought it was fun to read! Taking pictures is one thing but writing a story is certainly another, so thank you!

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  4. I'm glad Lilys not severely hurt!;)
    ~Rylee<3

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  5. Cute! I nominated you for some awards on my blog!

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    1. That is so sweet of you, I'm going to do a blog post of awards soon!

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